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Do you remember
When we watched that storm at sea?
I was so afraid of being
Swept away
By the thunder and the lightning.
You held my hand and told me
That whenever the storms came,
You would always be there.

I have just one question for you:

The storm is here; where are you now?
But all I can do is forget; why are you the one thing I can't get our of my head?
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ARoseByAnyOther's avatar
I love this so much. It captures the memories and the hurt that can come from these things, and it furthers the idea that promises are a double-edged sword: a promise made can make someone happy at that moment, but a promise never kept can haunt them for a long, long time. Keep it up!